The poem that I just finish reading, to me is so emotional. When I think of this poem it's like I can see faces all over the place. I see angry faces and very scared faces as well, I can also see their parent and their look in their eyes. It's
You have made a great start to your blog. It is very interesting to read about what you felt and what you could imagine when you read the poem. I wonder if you pressed enter before you finished your blog. You seem to have stopped mid-sentence! I would love to hear more about how the poem made you feel and whether or not you liked it. Sometimes you like things that make you feel emotional, but sometimes you don’t. I would love to hear whether or not you liked it. I really like the poem because it makes me feel emotional and because I can picture what it would look like. I think that only great writing can make you picture exactly what it would look like.
I look forward to reading more of your blog. Cheers, Ruby.
Hi Kotipi,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great start to your blog. It is very interesting to read about what you felt and what you could imagine when you read the poem.
I wonder if you pressed enter before you finished your blog. You seem to have stopped mid-sentence! I would love to hear more about how the poem made you feel and whether or not you liked it. Sometimes you like things that make you feel emotional, but sometimes you don’t. I would love to hear whether or not you liked it.
I really like the poem because it makes me feel emotional and because I can picture what it would look like. I think that only great writing can make you picture exactly what it would look like.
I look forward to reading more of your blog.
Cheers,
Ruby.