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Sunday, 10 December 2017

Dear Alicia....

Dear Alicia, we have just started our voyage on our Waka. I feel quite scared, I don't know what to expect!! Anyways how are you, me I'm actually quite great. We are a quarter way there. I wonder if there's any dogs or any cats? Well let's find out!!!!
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Safe travels, from your good friend Kotipi.
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2 comments:

  1. Ruby SLJ17 December 2017 at 17:25

    Hi Kotipi,

    Me again!
    Good work on this letter. I like how you have said you don’t know what to expect, everything would have been unknown!
    You could perhaps try to structure your letter more next time and add a space after: “Dear Alicia”.
    I like that you have included a question in your letter and I wonder if you could find the answer to that question for me. Were there any cats and dogs in New Zealand back then? I think that would be interesting to find out.

    I look forward to reading more of your blog.
    Cheers,
    Ruby.

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  2. sarah Glen Innes School29 December 2017 at 04:02

    Hey Kotipi
    My name is Sarah and I go to Glen Innes School
    Outstanding work, Keep it up. I love your letter it is so clear and so well written.

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