Fighting for my country trying to end the war,
trying my best to be strong like Thor.
I'm back with my kid and my whole family too,
but most of all I missed you!!
It's good to be HOME!
Hey there Kotipi, what a wonderful poem you have written! I love the way it rhymes and I am also most impressed with the simile you have used, where you compared your strength to Thor. Excellent work!
It's hard to imagine what it would have been like for soldiers in the war and also their families - not knowing when their loves one were returning home.
Do you like any other kinds of poems? I quite like acrostic ones but I think I mostly like ones that rhyme because it reminds me of music lyrics.
Hey there Kotipi, what a wonderful poem you have written! I love the way it rhymes and I am also most impressed with the simile you have used, where you compared your strength to Thor. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to imagine what it would have been like for soldiers in the war and also their families - not knowing when their loves one were returning home.
Do you like any other kinds of poems? I quite like acrostic ones but I think I mostly like ones that rhyme because it reminds me of music lyrics.
Thanks, Billy